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Post by Sheva Das on Apr 21, 2009 20:08:11 GMT -5
((A/N: The Bianca in here is NOT the Bianca of PJO. ;D))
Brrng...brrng...
Bianca's first thought was, Oh, my cell phone's ringing. Her second thought was, Wait. WHAT cell phone?
She stopped dead in the middle of the bustling sidewalk. As the crowd flowed around her, she fished a small black phone out of her pocket-a small black phone that she could have sworn wasn't there a minute before. Flipping it open, she did a double take.
The interior was perfectly smooth. There was no screen or keypad. In fact, there was nothing inside it at all, save a small, round circle on the bottom part.
What the-
Then the circle started to swirl. It's diameter expanded, and an unearthly light radiated out of it.
Bianca tried to pull away, but something seemed to draw her to the light. She raised the phone to eye level, trying to see what was causing it to glow.
Suddenly, the circle expanded. In one swift motion, the light enveloped her entire body, and sucked her into the pseudo-phone.
The passerbys didn't even notice a thing.
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Post by Caramel Kryptonite on Apr 22, 2009 6:13:19 GMT -5
Heehee, awesome so far! -boop, gone- LOLZ...
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Post by siriusblackissweet on Apr 22, 2009 6:28:29 GMT -5
Oh I like that alot!! It is like the cell from hell!!!
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Post by Ellen on Apr 22, 2009 10:04:31 GMT -5
Nice , Slightly bizzar, but good
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Post by Sheva Das on Apr 22, 2009 11:58:16 GMT -5
Lol. I was taking my little sister to her karate class, and I was so bored I just randomly thought this up...
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Post by Ellen on Apr 22, 2009 12:00:40 GMT -5
how most stories are born
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Post by Sheva Das on Apr 22, 2009 12:20:09 GMT -5
True. I might continue this; I had a good idea for the next part... (or rather, I had an idea for a really good line that I wouldn't want to go to waste. )
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Post by Ellen on Apr 22, 2009 12:47:15 GMT -5
sounds interesting.
I'm only Mortal was born because of a Math Exam
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Post by Caramel Kryptonite on Apr 22, 2009 14:40:23 GMT -5
I had the idea for Percy Jackson and the Invisible while sipping hot chocolate.
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Post by Raechelle on Apr 22, 2009 20:43:16 GMT -5
The majority of my ideas come to me when I'm half-asleep or wet. Actually that's how just about all of them come. It's ironic how I fear water, though...
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Post by siriusblackissweet on Apr 23, 2009 14:38:13 GMT -5
Here is the first chapter of a story a wrote. Sheva you know it. Chapter 1
Bad Dream
"Well time to hit the sack", Percy yawned as he plopped himself down on his bed in Poseidon’s cabin. After a long day of training in the arena, riding the Pegasus, and going on a capture the flag fight, tucking into bed was a blessing! The instant his head hit the pillow he was out like a light. He was in an arena filled with terrifying creatures screaming at him and throwing nasty filth at him. Then at that moment a huge hairy beast lumbered out of a dark passageway to the side of the arena. It roared a bloodcurdling roar that sent every warrior scurrying to their mothers. But the thing that sent Percy’s into his stomach was the beast pulled out a three foot long Battle Axe that would make you cut yourself if you just looked at it. "Oh, Crap", Percy muttered. Well, Percy now saw was that he was in a battle arena and he was the prey! The huge creature charged at him and he new that the battle had begun.
(Next time start a seperate thread in the Fanfiction section, and make sure you stay on topic with what we're discussing on this thread.) -Raechelle
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Post by treeckorules on Apr 23, 2009 16:58:46 GMT -5
I liked it Sheva.
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Post by siriusblackissweet on Apr 23, 2009 17:38:43 GMT -5
what about mine???
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Post by Sheva Das on Apr 23, 2009 17:41:44 GMT -5
Start a separate thread for it.
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